Change:addition to connect with the story. Without good ORGANIZATION, your reader is lost. When writing direct quotes, add imagery to the sentence. ENJOY! Even with her mighty engines in reverse, the ocean liner was pulled further and further into the canal.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 146) View all updates.

Change: just read the paragraph where you want to insert your addition. Remember to reread the story from the beginning each time before writing to keep the continuity of the storyline, to allow for your addition to connect with the story. Without good ORGANIZATION, your reader is lost. When   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 128) View all updates.

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Change:Write only one sentence for each of the four Direct Quote wiki pages, for a total of four sentences. Read carefully, then create your own sentences. Remember to use your Username and a colon before each sentence. Go to each of the following wiki pages: Direct Quotes / First Words   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 152) View all updates.

Change:(e.g. Jason shouted, “I“I am a doofus!”)doofus!”)When you repeat someone’s exact words, the repeated words are a direct quote. When you write, quotation marks (“ ”) help identify and set off a quotation. “openingquotation markYou begin with   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 152) View all updates.

Change:Lizzy looked in the ocean, then didn't move or talk. But Chad had a brilliant idea!"Here, why don't we do this! Maria and John, you guys are in fighting fish, right? Why   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 4399) View all updates.